
Maison Ikkoku episode #55

Translated by Daisuke Suzuki
Revision 2 by William Chow

     This script maybe distributed freely as long as the credits remained intacted.   It can also be used to make a subtitled copy only if we are sent a complimentary copy of the episode.   Please send comments, submissions, requests, correspondance, and video tapes to William Chow, Vancouver Animation, 2830 East 8th Ave, Vancouver, BC, Canada, V5M 1W9,  ph: (604) 253-4227   or Daisuke Suzuki, 1625 Grand Blvd, North Vancouver, B.C. Canada, V7L 3Y2.


One line Japanese-English Dictionary  (again)
sempai:  somebody's senior of somebody else.  Also used to address them as well.  Antonym = kouhai


Yagami:  That's the widow of the board house, isn't it?!
Godai:  !!.... 
Yagami:  Right, Godai-sensei!?
Godai:  That's none of your busine
Yagami:  Don't try to evade me!
Godai:  That's it, I'm leaving.
Yagami:  Wait! I still have to talk!
Godai:  Let go of me!
Yagami:  NO!!!
!!!!!
Yagami:  Sensei.....
Godai:  Yagami....
......
Kamiogi:  That's all!!
Yagami:  Kamiogi-sensei!!
Godai:  Err this's ..   !! kanrinin-san.....

Subtitle: "Pajama Girl Charging In!  Ikkoku-kan is Love-Panic"
(Don't blame me even if the title doesn't make sense.  Blame producers.  DS)
[Excuse Me with Pajama + Pajama and Neglige]

Yagami:  Damn it since then, the home room teacher's surveillance got heavier.  
"And the major problem is that widow."
"They had this weird atmosphere like he's dominated, or like being controlled, or something, right, Yagami?"
Yagami:  Don't judge just by atmosphere!
"And what are you going to do, Yagami?  The practicum placement is over in three days."
"You gonna give up?"
Yagami:  No way! 
"Oh you haven't cleaned up a bit!"
Yagami:  The hell should I give up.

Yagami:  So what about that old woman.  I'm more attractive than her!  ?  Come to think about it, that widow seemed to know the teacher..  And she looked like it's not the first time here...  hmmmm

Kamiogi:  Widow?   Oh, you mean, Kyoko Otonashi-san?
Yagami:  You know her?
Kamiogi:  Yes, she was graduate of this school.  My student.
Yagami:  Oh... 
Kamiogi:  She got married with Otonashi-sensei who was teaching here at that time.
Yagami:  With teacher?!
Kamiogi:  Yes, she was so crazy about him..
Yagami:  Oh then she's the same as me.
Kamiogi:  She wasn't as radical as you are.
Yagami:  ...   

"Damn she's late.  What's holding her up anyway?.."
"Must be chasing after Godai-sensei."
"Oh come on.  It's Saturday!"
"She was really at it, though.."

Yagami:  I see. So that widow was married to a teacher..  Then she isn't entitled to say anything about me and Godai-sensei.  
"Yagami!!!  What're you doing?!!!  Hurry, or we can't go home!!!"
"!! Where did my shoes go?"
Yagami:  Better settle this thing once and for all.

"Wow.. holy.."
"This kind thing isn't rare.."
"But I can't beleive it.  Men are all.."
"You're slow on these kind of things.  That's all.
PA:  Train #19 passing the platform #2.  Please stand behind the white line.


Godai:  !!!
Yagami:  Godai-sensei.
Godai:  Yagami-san!  
Yagami:  Can I go drop by your place, tomorrow?
Godai:  !  er... well,  er...  Right, my grandma will be in comma tomorrow.
Yagami:  Come on, Godai-sensei.  Don't be alarmed.  They're coming too.
"What?!"
Yagami:  You wouldn't be scared if we all go, right?
Godai:  It's not that I'd be scared or anything.  It's just that.. !!
Yagami:  Then let's make it a promise.
Godai:  sigh..


Baaw!
Kyoko:  !  Welcome home, Godai-san.  
Godai:  Oh, I'm home...
Kyoko:  The practicum placement's finally over by tomorrow, isn't it?
Godai:  Yes.. er.. sigh..
Kyoko:  And have you ended things with Yagami-san?
Godai:  !!  Before even end or whatever.  I'm not..
Kyoko:  Oh, sorry..  I didn't particularly..  It's just that she knows this place..
Godai:  !! 

Godai:  Right, she knows this place.  And she's coming over tomorrow...  

Godai:  And there's no guarantee that once the practicum placement is over, that's the end of it...

Yagami:  Hello!
Godai:  Oh, hi.
Yagami:  Excuse me..
Kyoko:  Oh.
Yagami:  Oh, thank you about the day before..
Godai:  Oh..
Kyoko:  ....  excuse me.
Godai:  Yes?
Kyoko:  Why didn't you tell me that they were coming?  I could've prepared something...
Godai:  But..
"They're like married couple.."
"Just as I figured."
"So moody.."
Yagami:  Please don't worry about that, kanrinin-san.  
Kyoko:  ?
Yagami:  Godai-sensei is single, so I figured you wouldn't have a thing, so I did all the shopping.
Kyoko:  Oh, I see.
Yagami:  Let's go, Godai-sensei.
Godai:  Then..  
Kyoko:  So aggressive..

!!
Yotsuya:  I'm Yotsuya. I've been waiting for you.  Please come in.
"Wow, Mr.Snake, you look cool."
"Is that brand new?"
Yotsuya:  My dead grandma showed up in the dream last night, and told me to wear the white tuxedo.
Yagami:  Such a dirty kitchen...

Kyoko:  Sorry I couldn't find matching cups.  Is this OK with you, Godai-san?
Godai:  Sure..
Yagami:  Sneaky irony, eh?..
(I assume Yotsuya is trying out his facial elasticity... DS)

"Say, Yagami"
Yagami:  ?
"What did you put in the bag that much?"
Yagami:  !!
"!! spilling over there!!  wipe quickly!!"
Godai:  floorcloth!!  !  Thank you!

"Good bye!"
Godai:  Bye!"
Yotsuya:  I'd hate to see you go..
Godai:  sigh... !!!
(They left one body count behind at Ikkoku-kan..)

CM break...

baw?
Ken: I'm home, Souichiro-san.

Godai:  WHAT????!!!!  YOU GONNA STAY HERE TONIGHT?!!!!   NO NO NO NO NO NOO!!!
Yagami:  I told my family I'm staying at my friend's house!  I can't go home!!
Godai:  Go home!
Yagami:  NO!
Godai:  I'll kick you out!!
Yagami:  Go for it if you can!!
Ichinose:  That's gonna be very interesting...
Godai:  You gonna create misunderstandings...
Akemi:  Really..
Yagami:  You touched my bust!
Yotsuya:  bust?.  That's gonna be hellova problem..
Yagami:  You touched me in PE prep room!!
Godai:  Th..that's a   That's an accident!!
Ichinose:  I wonder...
Godai:  It's your set up..
Akemi:  I wonder.. Godai-kun is dirty..  maybe he intentionally touched pretending to be accident..
Godai:  Will you cut it out?!  
Kyoko:  er..
Godai:  Oh kanrinin-san..
Kyoko:  It may be better not shout that much...
Godai:  I can't let this go on.  I have to end this once and for all!!!!  Listen, Yagami.  You have to know social conduct as high school student...  ?
Yagami:  You  touched..
Godai:  Wa..wait.. You don't have to cry..
Yagami:  You touched my bust!  WEEP! 
(OK, she does say "I can't get married," but that rather traditional cliche whimpering, which in most times applies to cases where a man accidentally seeing a girl naked..  If you wanna put it on the subtitle, go for it.  I won't be responsible for any complains you get.   DS)
Godai:  Ya.. Yagami..  Yagami-kun.. Yagami-san...
Ichinose:  She's one hellova of a girl..
Kyoko:  sigh..

Godai:  !! What're you doing!!  Put your clothes back on!!
Kyoko:  !! What're you... ?
Yagami:  I already changed.  I can't go home.

Yotsuya:  It's fun eating dinner with so many people.  I'm honored that I'm also invited.
Godai:  I don't recall anybody inviting you.
Yotsuya:  Yagami-san's cooking tastes great with a touch of bitterness.  You even put Jew's ear.. oh, it's burnt cabbage..
Yagami:  I'm happy you liked it.  I'll make nikujaga (see episode #16 for description.) tomorrow morning.
Yotsuya:  She's such a good girl.  Let her stay, Godai-kun.
Godai:  You gotta be kidding.  Listen, Yagami go home after you eat dinner.  I'll go with you down to the station.
Yagami:  Can't go with this on.
Godai:  Then, change.
Yagami:  No.   
Kyoko:  Damn it.. what's she thinking?..
Godai:  Even if nothing happens, the public view is...
Have to buy time till the last train..  and I'll stay no matter what..  If I can't stay in Godai-sensei's room, I'll stay in widow's room.  It's the best chance to talk about Godai-sensei.
Akemi:  I'm stuffed..
Yotsuya:  Thank you for the food.
Ken:  I'm done!
Ichinose:  Wait.  Take your dad's dinner..
Ken:  Hm..
Ichinose:  Then let's get ready for them.
Yotsuya:  Really..   
Kyoko:  ?
Godai:  ?

Yotsuya:  Go to bed.  Please don't mind us and do as much as you want.
Godai:  Wh..what're you talking about?!  Will you cut out those kind of pranks?!
Ichinose:  Go for it, little lady..
Akemi:  Come on..
Yagami:  But.. why all of a sudden..
Akemi:  What're you talking about?  We talked, ate, so all there's left is to go to sleep.  Right?
Yagami:  But... 
Kyoko:  Better go home while you can.  Don't think these people are doing this as a joke.
Godai:  Y..yeah, they're walking non-sense!!
Yagami:  What's that eye?.. She must be underestimating me, as a kid..
Yotsuya:  Good going!
Kyoko:  So stubborn..  
Godai:  Alright, then..  you can stay here.
Yagami:  !!
Kyoko:  !!
Godai:  I'll stay at Yotsuya-san's
Yotsuya:  No thank you.
Ichinose:  My place is crowed enough with three of us.
Akemi:  No thanks
Godai:  Will you cut it out?!
Kyoko:  Alright then, come to my room.
Godai:  ! Bu..but kanrinin-san..
Kyoko:  Do we have any other choice?
Yagami:  Wha..what kind of woman is she?  So lascivious.. Inviting in men freely into room like that.
Godai:  Bu.. but are you sure.. a..I.
Kyoko:  What're you talking about?  Come on, Yagami-san.  Come to my room.
Godai:  Oh..
Yagami:  Why didn't she say so in the first place?

Kyoko:  Then Good night!
Yagami:  Good night!  Godai-sensei, please have a dream about me.
Ichinose:  She gave up pretty easily...

Yagami:  Sorry for causing so much trouble..
Kyoko:  Not at all.  This's the best opportunity to tell her not to haunt around Godai-san.  But then, no way she would actually respond to normal persuasion...  
Yagami:  Sempai.
Kyoko:  ?
Yagami:  To be honest, I always wanted to talk to you, sempai.
Kyoko:  What' do you mean, "sempai"?
Yagami:  You're grad of the school I go to, right?
Kyoko:  Yes, I am.. but..  what's going on in her head?

Yagami:  Tell me, sempai..
Kyoko:  ?
Yagami:  Were you that busty since high school days?
Kyoko:  No, mine was like yours..
(There was a line in manga which was omitted in anime.  I loved it, so here.   Kyoko:  Stop describing me like a cow.. (grumbling about Yagami's question.)  DS)
Yagami:  Oh, then you went for it with cuteness.
Kyoko:  ?
Yagami:  I heard from my teacher that you got married with your teacher, right?
Kyoko:  !
Yagami:  May I ask you to give me an advice on the key to success, for later reference?
Kyoko:  Before we discuss that, do you seriously love Godai-san?
Yagami:  Yes.
...
Kyoko:  Aren't you joking around for fun?
Yagami:  No way.
Kyoko:  Not out of fickleness?
Yagami:  Of course not.
Kyoko:  What's so good about that man?
Yagami:  Something wrong with me falling for Godai-sensei?
Kyoko:  It's not that anything wrong..  It's just that your behavior is..
Yagami:  Is wrong?
Kyoko:  Let's say that it is beyond the boundary of normal acceptable behavior.
Yagami:  So, I wanted to ask you as to the conduct of proper teacher-student relationship, since you were successful in it.
Kyoko:  Let's go to sleep.  You have school to go to tomorrow, right?

Godai:  Still bugs me..  No way that Yagami would go to sleep easily..  

Yagami:  Say, sempai..  hello..  pretending to be asleep.  You actually love Godai-sensei.  That's it.  That's why you're trying to stop me.
Kyoko:  When did I try to stop you?
Yagami:  You stopped me from staying at Godai-sensei's room.
Kyoko:  What're you talking about?  I saved you.  You may not know it, but even Godai-san is male!
Godai:  The heck?  Came over to see if she's alright, and look how she's treating me.  So stupid.. better go back to sleep..

Yagami:  Let's cut out the talk about general rules. 
Kyoko:  Will you..
Yagami:  Why are you trying to stop me?  
Kyoko:  So, I don't want man-woman trouble in my apartment, as a janitor.
Yagami:  And do you have the right to also interfere with the tenant's love relationship?  
Kyoko:  ...
Yagami:  Let me ask you a question.  Godai-sensei loves you.
Kyoko:  ! So?
Yagami:  What about you, sempai?  
Kyoko:  !!
Yagami:  Do you love Godai-sensei?  
Kyoko:  ... 
Yagami:  Let's hear it.  You love Godai-sensei, right?
Kyoko:  Me?  I err.. I'm not particularly...

baaww..
Yagami:  See you later.  
Kyoko + Ichinose:  See you later..
Yagami:  Come on let's hurry, we'll be late..
Ichinose:  Such a cute sight.
Kyoko:  Really..
Baff!  Baw!  baff!!
Godai:  ???
Kyoko:  Oh sorry, Souichiro-san.  I'm really sorry!  Souichiro-san!!
(Again, revised in anime version.  I preferred the manga version.  
As Yagami and Godai leaves, there's this big crack sound of wood breaking..  
Godai:  ?
And back at the front door, Kyoko is sweeping as usual. 
Kyoko:  Oh my.. this broom getting too old...
Ichinose: .. )


-post script

worked on two manga episodes:
9:30pm to  10:30pm 5/09
Yagami: 00am to  10:30am 5/10

check over with audio tape
2:45 pm to 3:30pm  5/10
(ignoring the time elapsed for spell check)



